From f00bc2d94c924263f991809b29151018ffa9924f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jeremy Penner <jeremy@sporktania.com>
Date: Thu, 3 Mar 2011 11:42:10 -0800
Subject: [PATCH] write section two

---
 timemachine.xml | 85 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--
 1 file changed, 83 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/timemachine.xml b/timemachine.xml
index 039a616..8fd3c5c 100644
--- a/timemachine.xml
+++ b/timemachine.xml
@@ -46,8 +46,89 @@
 	  </pastresponse>
   </section>
   <section name="next">
-  	<nev name="start">
-  		Larry is alone with the DeLorean in the lab, for the first time.
+  	  <nev name="start">
+  		<set var="number">null</set>
+  		<set var="fInRoom">false</set>
+  		<set var="fBeenInRoom">false</set>
+  	  	<donext nev="realstart"/>
+  	  </nev>
+	  <nev name="realstart">
+  		<p>"So I just write down the number I see on the screen?" says Larry.</p>
+  		<p>"Yep," says Richard.</p>
+  		<p>"And what does this tell us, exactly?" says Larry.</p>
+  		<p>"Well, when you come out of the [room], I'm going to type the number you give me into the computer, which
+  			will make it show up on the screen before you wrote it down," says Richard.</p>
+  		<p>"And what does this tell us, exactly?" says Larry again, exasperated.</p>
+  		<p>"A number that neither of us picked," says Richard.</p>
   	</nev>
+  	<word name="room">
+  		<verb name="Enter">
+  			<cond>!fInRoom</cond>
+  			<cond>!fBeenInRoom</cond>
+  			<set var="fInRoom">true</set>
+  			<set var="fBeenInRoom">true</set>
+  			<p>Larry sighs and opens the door.  Inside the [room] is a computer [screen].</p>
+  		</verb>
+  		<verb name="Leave">
+  			<cond>fInRoom</cond>
+	  		<set var="fInRoom">false</set>
+  			Larry goes back into the lab.  [Richard] looks at him expectantly.  "Well?" he asks.
+  		</verb>
+  	</word>
+  	<word name="screen">
+  		<verb name="Read">
+  			<cond>fInRoom</cond>
+  			$[if (number === null) {]
+  				<p>
+  					Larry looks at the screen.  It's blank.  "Well, hell," he says, feebly scanning the [room]
+  					for another, hidden screen that might have a number on it.  He doesn't find one.
+  				</p>
+  			$[} else {]
+  				<p>
+  					Larry looks at the screen.  The number $(number) is displayed on it.
+  				</p>
+  			$[}]
+  			<p>He looks down at his piece of [paper] for a moment.</p>
+  		</verb>
+  	</word>
+  	<pastresponse after="start" future_cause="paper.write">
+  		<set var="number">6</set>
+  	</pastresponse>
+  	<word name="paper">
+  		<verb name="write" display="Write down number">
+  			<cond>fInRoom</cond>
+  			$[if (false) {]
+  				<p>
+  					Larry is at a loss for a moment, but then decides that the thing to do is to just write down a number.
+  					He chooses six.
+  				</p>
+  			$[} else {]
+  				<p>"Huh," says Larry, scrawling down a large number $(number) on his paper.  "Wonder what that means."</p>
+  			$[}]
+  			<donext nev="room.Leave"/>
+  		</verb>
+  	</word>
+  	<word name="Richard">
+  		<verb name="give" display="Give paper" nextsection="notes">
+  			<cond>fBeenInRoom</cond>
+  			$[if (number === null) {]
+  				<p>Larry shows Richard the blank piece of paper.  "Nothing on the screen," he says.</p>
+  				<p>
+  					Richard slaps himself on the forehead.  "Of course!  I can't believe I didn't think of that.  If you
+  					don't show me a number, I won't type it in, which means you won't see a number, which means no paradox.
+  					Duh.  How stupid of me.  Forget I even asked."
+  				</p>
+  			$[} else {]
+  				<p>Larry holds up the piece of paper.  "It said $(number)".</p>
+  				<p>Richard looks quizzically at the paper.  "$(number)?  Are you sure?"</p>
+  				<p>A look of alarm crosses Larry's face.  "Is... is $(number) bad?"</p>
+  				<p>"No, no, it's just I would have expected something, I don't know, more random, or meaningful, I guess,"
+  					says Richard.  "You didn't just make up some number?"</p>
+  				<p>"Of course not!" says Larry, offended.  "Go ahead and look for yourself.  The screen says $(number)."</p>
+  				<p>"No, no, I believe you," says Richard, and types a $(number) into his computer.</p>
+  			$[}]
+  		</verb>
+  	</word>
+  </section>
   </section>
 </story>